ac1d-warrior's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Square and Circle- Love]

hehe...

that was realy funny...

BUT you should do what Anonimatior said and go look for tutorials..
still realy funny...

keep trying and you will become better...

[Out for a Stroll]

Wow...

this is the first flash i have reviewed today that i liked...

Its very cute and well drawn... but unfortunately it loses rating because the animation is abit jurky...

Keep it up though...

[FlashShorts #3]

just so you know...

this is a loop not a short, and a very bad one at that. all it is, is a car driving backwords past signs and some buildings...

If you DO create a short then put some more effort into it... and by the looks of it i think you would do better if you started out with stick animation... its easy and its also good practice for getting the flow right etc...

[MEGA?]

what the?

What was that? There was no comedy in it (that i could see), the sound was horrendous, the animation was..... yeah... and the overall quality was below poor...

Think of a story, or something funny, or even just mindless violence and start animating that. Even if you are not a strong animator you will get there just dont post useless, random junk. Im not trying to be an asshole here, im trying to tell you that you should put more effort into the things you submit....

OH! and if you take my advice and create something, for god's sake use a better song and dont overlap it with 8bit music...

Ushnor responds:

thnk u i am going 2 do all that stuf fnow u just changed my lif

[E-Sheep Episode 4]

Its a good idea, but...

Its way too short for 2.6mb,
Its boring,
and the sound at the end is way too noisy.

so sort out the file size,
create atleast SOME sort of story,
and plan out your sound more so that i dont want to mute it.